Pulse Temple

 

This is Pulse Temple. Where the indigenous people emphasize the strength of the heartbeat, and the power of music. Here, we are all humans, no matter what country or race, or social class, or background or family, but we're all connected by a pulse.

Where to Begin: Part II

Last week, the post on Beginning a Book began with a brief discussion bout Hooks.

Let's say your plot cannot begin with that exciting climactic material that would be the textbook-definition of a 'hooky' opening. What do you do to make a solid beginning? 

 Take a Snapshot

Let's say your book features some of the most mundane characters ever, living a (seemingly) ordinary life. The most cliche thing you can do is open your book with an introduction of themselves, waking up to an alarm clock, or looking in a mirror. Why? Because it draws attention to itself. What do these things have in common? These scenes are beginnings of themselves. Nothing screams "I'm beginning a book" than with beginning with someone's first day at a new school.

So take a snapshot. Since these characters had lived years of life up until this plotline, act like they had a life before and are not simply coming into existence when you first started writing them. Starting the book by jumping right in the middle of their commute to work, a conversation at dinner, dance recital, etc. Pay close attention to the little things, like the specific way the character likes to order Chinese food, or the dislike they have for holiday decorations. Point out the fine details and contemplation that only your character would point out. Make it sound like the reader interrupted your character's life at a random, inopportune and personal time--and not at a self-aware beginning. Still has the effect of a fast-pace with Lights, Camera, and Action on your first words.  

Paint a Picture

No book can happen without a setting, everything has to happen somewhere. So sometimes your setting should get a glimpse of the spotlight. Think about a cozy mystery that paints the picture of that old-fashioned roadside diner whose neon lights glimmer against the rain-splashed roadway just past midnight, where inside the detective orders a reliable cup of coffee brewed just the way he likes it. Let the reader glide into the scenery of your world with some establishing shots.

Meditate

The opening of the book is where you can devote some space to ruminate about the underlying messages and themes about your book without being intrusive to the plot. Open with a couple of truths and/or a couple of questions to set the tone about what challenges or boundaries your character may have to overcome (but do this gingerly and subtly). Maybe in the process you redefine what is constituted as normal in your universe. But only give them a taste. You want to lure them in a way that provokes curiosity, you don't want to show them your full deck of cards. This approach can be much like having a narration at the beginning (cue Morgan Freeman voice).

So here are three different angles you can use to attack "boring" beginnings with, using 3 different foci: your character, your setting, or your message. You may even be able to marry all three of these into a whole chapter. 

 And for additional inspiration, you're probably watching shows & movies on your favorite streaming device, you're also watching beginnings on a regular basis. So remember: Write it Like You'll Watch It!
 

 

Where to Begin?

 I got a lot to say....Where to Begin...in a story?

 Well, if you are writing about a villain who has a dastardly plot to release a series of bombs in world-renowned tourist destinations, and an MI6 operative who has a special set of skills to thwart said plot...chances are...you're not going to have any difficulty starting this book off with a bang. (Well you might have some, but you'll have plenty of opportunity to plausibly devise an explosive entrance).

There's a lot of pressure to start a book that hooks you right in. But what if you're writing Drama, or Romance, a Slow Burn, or what if your character isn't launched into the excitement right away? Does the beginning of your book still need a hook? One with excitement, mystery, wrenching emotion or spectacle?

Yes, in some circumstances.  

Be aware that if you want to be a traditionally-published author, many submissions calls will ask for just the first chapter, first 500 words, first page, etc. So having a strong immediate beginning will be important. It's not uncommon for prospective readers to sample your book by picking up and giving it a quick read from the beginning to catch your vibe.

 But also, no... In some circumstances.When I think about it, I've almost never picked up a book based off of how it opened...what would hook me was the blurb on the back of the cover. I needed to be promised that what I was going to journey into was worth it, I didn't need to arrive on page one. When it comes to book reviews, I see little to nearly-nonexistent praise for how books open, but how well it holds their attention. When readers decide to buy your book, chances are they will be willing to invest a few chapters in it unless in your beginning there are some very large red flags that makes them drop it and run.

With that said, your pacing, writing style and characterization needs to be smooth. An active beginning will bridge the gap to your conflict, but if your plot does not allow for starting off with a bang, I would like to share some ways you can get that first chapter started regardless. Stay tuned!

Thoughts? Opinions? Rebuttals and Disagreements? Share your thoughts below!

 

Atmosphere - The Best Day

 

This is a song that's very easy to recommend. It is just so practical. Marvelous storytelling (especially in the 3rd verse). Almost any adult from across the country can sympathize with these struggles from work, school and every day life, and yet learn that not every day can be amazing...we got to take our middle-of-the-rut days with stride.

Pinball

 

Pinball - 2010.
Anybody else want to revisit the glory of playing of pinball machine?

Personal Work - The Launchpad

 

One thing’s for certain,

Is you could never be too certain

Gotta weigh the risk, is it worth it?

Gonna spark a question it’s burning

Before you pull that Iron Curtain.

Gotta tear the wall like it’s Berlin

That’s a second world like it’s Kyrgyz

From your comfort zone in your courage.

Wanna leave a trail like it’s Bourbon,

Of all my art and recordings, 

If it goes south like New Orleans,

I still try, don’t forfeit.

I swing my sword like the Motherland

Statue in Volgograd.

I went to school, I go grad.

Switched a major like a nomad

I was so mad, but I made it.

With early-bird and night-owl moves.

With more walls than Kowloon

Don’t doubt you before Round 2.

This is the Launchpad.

 

My first rap and first personal work shared to this blog, I present: The Launchpad 

Gramatik - Muy Tranquilo

 

 

And now, time for something jazzy. Elegant. Though Gramatik is branded as an electronic artist, he uses organic instruments and soulful/hiphop vibes to bring a sound I think is better described as Lounge. Fitting as this is the perfect kind of late night music to unwind to.